Thursday, 16 June 2011

Wednesday, 18 May 2011

Tuesday, 10 May 2011

Washing Machine

The start:
He talked about the experience of his mother to make audience understand better.
He also talked some jokes and his voice are so attractive to hear.


Signposting:
His transition was good and reliable to hear because he talked in detailed.


Structure:
His structure organized well: beginning, body and the end.


Delivery:
He delivered his information well that can convince the audience's thoughts.
Also, his voice was clear and loud.


Visual aids:
His visual aids are good and mostly his body language helped the audience to convince.
He also brought the real washing machine and then he showed so it gave the more information to the audience.


The end:
He ended his presentation by telling stories and even jokes are really effective and fun.
He got the strong feelings that he wanted to convince the audience and had unique statement.



Tuesday, 26 April 2011

Technologies in Future

It is better to live life easily but do you know that it can effect your health a lot?
First of all, when you live at your house with just touching buttons and touch screen,
it can make you very fat and lazy. And if you keep on doing like that,
you probably not gonna walk or move forever. Of course, it can make your life easier
but the situations after that will be trouble.
Second, it waste too much of money and will be the problem for economically.
It used too much of energy and electric. Example like electric cars or solar power cars are
the examples of wasting environment. In the future, you can use a lot new technologies if the world is economically increased but always remember that not all the things can give you benefits.

Tuesday, 19 April 2011

Podcast Script


The fun facts about my country

Introduction
Angella: Hello, kids. I will introduce myself first. My name is Hye Been Kim but please call me Angella. I am come from Korea, Seoul but now I live in Vietnam and going to school called AIS. I am in 8grade. My city, Seoul is known for the best crowded city ever. We have a lot of neighbor and they are all really friendly. Korea and Washington, DC is 6945 miles away. So, it is really far. Now I will start my podcast.

(Funny voices & sounds)

Angella: Seoul is the capital of Korea. As you know, Korea has a high quality in technology like phone, computer or television. The fact of my country is that South Korea earns credit for being the largest shipbuilder in the world and South Korea is the only country that boasts of DMB, WiBro and 100Mbit/s Broadband. In my city, every 6’oclock in the morning, a lot of people woke up early to sell foods or things. They look really busy. Also, our family woke up to get to work. In the market, the people are willing to buy cheaper things to save money. Fish, meat and other things are also hoping to buy them. Thank you for listening!!!
(Crowded people’s sounds & music)

Monday, 7 March 2011

Cat Tien national park

 My favorite memory in Cat Tien was that when we had a night safari. During the night safari, we saw a beautiful deer, a pig, small wildcat and owl.
I really liked deer because the eyes of deer was really pretty and was so big. I wished I have big eyes, too. Another thing I saw on the safari was a lazy pig and it was fat and even hard to move. It was really funny that a pig across the road very slowly.  I also saw gibbons from the monkey island and they were really cute and big. They were hanging up from the tree and playing around. We took some pictures of them. It was great and fun. Through the field trip, I got a lot of things. First, I made a lot of friends. Second, I had a new experience. For these things, I think this grade 8 field trip was a great trip ever.

Wednesday, 16 February 2011

Monday, 10 January 2011

                               <SEVEN THINGS I WANT TO SEE IN FUTURE PARK>   

      In the future park, i want to see...
1)Free international call
2)Horse-ride
3)Painting competition
4)UFO-ride
5)Swimming pool and ski court
6)Karaoke with hotel and restaurant
7)Meeting aliens
    Hi... My name is Angella. I am in grade 8. Did you have a nice holiday? Well... I think i did. I am going to talk about my holiday.

   First, my aunt came over to visit us from Korea. I was so pleased. We went theater to watch a movie. The name of  a movie is 'Harry Potter' It was interesting but very complicated. The most happiest thing in my holiday was when my aunt cooked delicious foods  for me. My aunt is really good cook. On weekend, i went to church. I prayed for everything. If  i pray, it makes me relax and happy.

 The second, i was surprised that my brother can go to the store by himself. Before, he cannot even go to toilet alone. So,my mom was really worried. But this holiday my brother bought drink for me. I was really surprised and relieved. Now, my mother is not gonna worried.

 The third,  the most sad thing was that my aunt was sick. In truth, she had cancer in her body and she just finished her operation in Korea and came here. I was so glad that my aunt is not sick anymore. I hope she will never get hurt anymore... Okay. This is the end of my holiday. Thank you.